For continuity's sake....

[Unbreathless]

Pt. 2 of my story should be taken down.
Rath is using one of the character's in this in a totally different manner.

The girl, Mara is his Dorothy.
Doesn't work... besides... I like his story better.

[Unbreathless]

and if it is to stay up, at least have the final draft up. (which that isn't)

i don't blame anyone. I was being a bitch and kept sending different copies/edits of it to Claudia, so I'm not surprised she got confused.

[Hastur]

I'm so sorry Johnny. I honestly thought I had the right one to send in.

My apologies. I'll try not to let it happen again.

[Hastur]

And Dave was nice enough to take it down.

Sorry about the mess.

[Unbreathless]

thanks a lot!
no problem really.
i can totally understand you getting mixed up

i was kind of an ass in sending in like 5 copies all similar edits.

sorry about that.
i have to re-write Pt. 2
but i think i have a good layout for a cool story, without crazy gods and devil's in johnny's head. :D

but that could be fun too! hehe

thanks again for the help... hope too many people don't get confused