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WrappedinPlastic loves life
08-19-2002, 08:14 PM
and my first Chud Story...watcha think of it?

<a href="http://www.chud.com/chudstories/stories/memoirsof.php3" target="_blank">http://www.chud.com/chudstories/stories/memoirsof.php3</a>

It's nothing special, just a strange little trying to be funny horror short story.

Michael Rabattino
08-19-2002, 08:32 PM
I really liked it....good job and that was a kickass last line.

Capt. Eucalyptus
08-19-2002, 08:49 PM
Either bizarrely creepy or creepily bizarre.

WrappedinPlastic loves life
08-19-2002, 09:24 PM
Thanks guys! Gotta see what that last line I put was...

"You just have to keep running, for if you stop your screams will echo in the night as you lay in sleep for the rest of time."

I totally forgot writing that... eek!