It's my first (finished) story...

[WrappedinPlastic loves life]

and my first Chud Story...watcha think of it?

<a href="http://www.chud.com/chudstories/stories/memoirsof.php3" target="_blank">http://www.chud.com/chudstories/stories/memoirsof.php3</a>

It's nothing special, just a strange little trying to be funny horror short story.

[Michael Rabattino]

I really liked it....good job and that was a kickass last line.

[Capt. Eucalyptus]

Either bizarrely creepy or creepily bizarre.

[WrappedinPlastic loves life]

Thanks guys! Gotta see what that last line I put was...

"You just have to keep running, for if you stop your screams will echo in the night as you lay in sleep for the rest of time."

I totally forgot writing that... eek!