"No Marks Here" by yt

[Smilin' Jack Ruby]

Fantastically fucked up Lovecraftian nightmare. One of the best horror stories I've read here or in print in quite some time. Not only is it a really scary-ass tale, but it's also extremely well-written/executed. You could publish that shit in "Cemetery Dance" or any other place that publishes short horror tomorrow.

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[Hellblazer]

Okay, I'm going to go read this now.

And Jack, if yt's phone sex horror story isn't up on Chudstories, PM her and get her to email it to you. I read that thing in broad daylight in a room full of people and it creeped me the fuck out.

[WickerMan]

Smilin' Jack Ruby:
Fantastically fucked up Lovecraftian nightmare. One of the best horror stories I've read here or in print in quite some time. Not only is it a really scary-ass tale, but it's also extremely well-written/executed. You could publish that shit in "Cemetery Dance" or any other place that publishes short horror tomorrow.

<a href="http://www.chudstories.com/stories/marks.php3" target="_blank">http://www.chudstories.com/stories/marks.php3</a>I have to agree with u there Mr. Ruby, that was excellant.
Very descriptive and drew u in, made me feel like it was me talking and not actually reading something.
Ok that may sound stupid but thats how much i enjoyed this story.

Well done YT keep up the excellant work. :)

[Hellblazer]

Excellent, excellent tale. Loved it.

[Dan Whitehead]

Fantastic. Brilliant idea, expertly realised. Loved it.

[Capt. Eucalyptus]

Grat stuff. I can't pick out any one thing that's good cause it all is.

[Blofeld]

&lt;insert keanu reeves reaction&gt;

Nice work, yt.

[yt]

Thanks for reading it, guys. I enjoyed writing it. I've read a couple of the other stories and it's such a great collection!

ps. Here I am in beautiful Seattle and all I can think of is the Green River Killer trawling for whores along the Sea-Tac expressway... what's wrong with me?

[Unbreathless]

you're fucked up, thats whats wrong... or RIGHT in this case. MAN.... That was just cool. Had me freaking out. I'll never give blood again.... ok maybe I will, but still, that was a great story.

[Dennis]

Ass kickingly creepy story YT. Thanks for fucking up another nights sleep for me.

[Dave Davis]

yeesh. and to think i just gave blood a couple weeks ago.

that could've been ME.

[voltes5]

yt, I loved your story, girl. It flowed really well and it was extremely suspenseful. I loved the imagery of his last jump with a wave of blood going after him. Really creepy! eek!

I just have a question: Won't his arm that Freckles had missed a vein earlier be an opening for those living blood?

[yt]

Thanks for reading it, JTHM, Dennis/GOT, Dave and Voltes. The last time I gave blood, about two months ago, I was fixated on the filled bags being taken away to be locked in a room somewhere where, for all we know, they Thing out.

Voltes, there are gaffes aplenty in this one (in fact I think the snoring guy's continuity is majorly f'd up) but this paragraph happens near the end:

"Under a street light I took a tentative look under the johnny, but all my parts looked the same. No marks, not even the place where Freckles missed the vein. Not even a scar. The vessel was sealed tight."

So, it healed over.

[voltes5]

yt, I've neglected to inform both you and Mr. Whitehead about my -1 SAT Score in Reading Comprehension. I got the negative score because I thought "Grade" meant the grade of my eyeglasses which I do believe now needs a higher grade!