That Which is Not Dead

[walter-konkrete]

I am writing a serial stry. Part 1 is up now. Its a pulpy collision of horro sub-genres. Tell me what you think. Spare no critiques. My skin is thick, and I always want to learn from my mistakes.

[Hastur]

So where is part I?

[walter-konkrete]

uhhh..its up at chudstories :confused: I just saw it? Is something wrong?

[Dave Davis]

still there.
<a href="http://www.chud.com/chudstories/stories/whichis.php3" target="_blank">http://www.chud.com/chudstories/stories/whichis.php3</a>

rather enjoyed it, meself.

[walter-konkrete]

also, there's supposed to be a page/chapter break in the middle denoting a change of setting. It was spaced in my orig. file, but it isn't formatted that way on the site. can it be fixed? its kind of jarring right now...

# 2 as soon as i can

[Capt. Eucalyptus]

Very good man. Can't wait to read the next installment.

[Dave Davis]

walter-kraken:
also, there's supposed to be a page/chapter break in the middle denoting a change of setting. It was spaced in my orig. file, but it isn't formatted that way on the site. can it be fixed? its kind of jarring right now...

e-mail me.

[Rollo Tomasi]

Excellent job. I like your writing style, very detailed and eloquent. I'll be waiting for Part 2 as well.