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angelbaby
07-27-2002, 06:56 AM
It's called "The Devil Within" and it follows a girl called Amy Vale, she's your typical outcast with only a couple of friends and always gets teased by those jocks and bitchy chicks. She loses one of her friends to them when one day he comes to school and he is really changed.

One day she runs into a girl called Luci who asks Amy what she always wanted. Amy at first is a bit freaked but finally tells her that she wants to be beautiful and that those people at school would actually give her a go. The next morning sure enough Amy has changed lost a few pounds gained a few on her chest and has a totally beautiful face. She goes to school and yep all those people give her a go. Her life is going well til her new friends start to get picked off by a mysterious killer who leaves his trade mark "Payback" on every body. Is it your typical serial killer or is there something slightly more sinister involved.
(Hint: Luci is shortened for "Lucifer")

well what do you think??

Hastur
07-28-2002, 02:49 PM
Go for it. Sounds like it could be good.

Unbreathless
07-30-2002, 01:28 PM
The devil is always a good edition to a story... unless hes actually telling you to put him in it, then you might have to up your medication.

the devil is in my stories too... but not cuz he told me to, it was just a coincidence.

I like stories! tee hee :D