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[Jackass is Gothic now]

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<a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=938859" target="_blank">"The Real Full House" Rated: R</a>

<a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=934380" target="_blank">"Clerks: The Next Day" Rated: R</a>[/QB][/QUOTE]

[imported_T_M]

Ah - The Real Full House was a classic. 9/10

I would try to space your lines though.

[Jackass is Gothic now]

Thanks! Anybody else?

[Blofeld]

Moved to CHUDSTories.

[Michael Rabattino]

Ah, love the sig, Blo....

[Blofeld]

I've just finished watching the first season.

[Jackass is Gothic now]

What do you guys think of my stories?

[voltes5]

Your "Clerks" fanfic was exactly like a "Clerks"-film or the short-lived "Clerks"-animated series. As a fanfic, you have successfully emulated the "Clerks" universe. I swear though, some of the scenes reminded me of the cartoon.

Your "Full House" is a bit "bizarre" because I'm not too familiar with the show. I did see that it's a perversion of a supposedly family-friendly show. But isn't this a "skit" rather than a "story"? Not to be nitpicky, but can you spot the errors here?:

They rush threw the kitchen
Stephanie and D.J together: Bye Dad, Bye Uncle Jesse, Bye Joey
Danny: I think something is up with those two.
Joey: What do you get when you through a red rock in a green river?
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Stephanie and D.J comes threw the door Danny is waiting for them. Stephanie runs upstairs.

For fanfics they're pretty good. That website's got tons of pop-ads though.

[Jackass is Gothic now]

Voltes Tips Mr. Pink:
Your "Clerks" fanfic was exactly like a "Clerks"-film or the short-lived "Clerks"-animated series. As a fanfic, you have successfully emulated the "Clerks" universe. I swear though, some of the scenes reminded me of the cartoon.

Your "Full House" is a bit "bizarre" because I'm not too familiar with the show. I did see that it's a perversion of a supposedly family-friendly show. But isn't this a "skit" rather than a "story"? Not to be nitpicky, but can you spot the errors here?:

They rush threw the kitchen
Stephanie and D.J together: Bye Dad, Bye Uncle Jesse, Bye Joey
Danny: I think something is up with those two.
Joey: What do you get when you through a red rock in a green river?
----------
Stephanie and D.J comes threw the door Danny is waiting for them. Stephanie runs upstairs.

For fanfics they're pretty good. That website's got tons of pop-ads though.It's hard fixing your mistakes on the story. Because the site makes ou have to remove it and make another file so it gets annoying.

[Jackass is Gothic now]

Sorry Guys. But I need reviews here.

[Xymog (Mike Toot)]

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[Hastur]

I didn't even get a chance to read the bloody things because there were so many pop-ups that Pop-Up Killer was hammering out a staccato disco beat.

And don't tell me to turn off the Pop-Up Killer because I like knowing when the ad-servers are trying to put crap on my system.